Shorten one-line comments. Boy, I'm listed as MAINTAINERs in a

lot of ports or what! ;>

70 files changed, 70 insertions, 70 deletions

diff --git a/astro/xphoon/pkg-comment b/astro/xphoon/pkg-comment
index 5b1e86ca9cb4..e79090eab8f5 100644
--- a/astro/xphoon/pkg-comment
+++ b/astro/xphoon/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-xphoon sets X the root window to a picture of the moon in its current phase
+Set the root window to the moon in its current phase
diff --git a/benchmarks/lmbench/pkg-comment b/benchmarks/lmbench/pkg-comment
index 241815f44fd3..591a21e5e11f 100644
--- a/benchmarks/lmbench/pkg-comment
+++ b/benchmarks/lmbench/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-lmbench-1.0, system performance measurement tool
+A system performance measurement tool
diff --git a/devel/xxgdb/pkg-comment b/devel/xxgdb/pkg-comment
index 79291f43471e..af9eada59471 100644
--- a/devel/xxgdb/pkg-comment
+++ b/devel/xxgdb/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-xxgdb 1.11, an X window interface for gdb
+An X window interface for gdb
diff --git a/editors/e93/pkg-comment b/editors/e93/pkg-comment
index a37804abab62..a9bad6ce6bd8 100644
--- a/editors/e93/pkg-comment
+++ b/editors/e93/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-e93-1.2r5X, a nifty editor based on Tcl/Tk.
+A nifty editor based on Tcl/Tk
diff --git a/editors/mule-common/pkg-comment b/editors/mule-common/pkg-comment
index b8a3bece7f71..a942ef6fd09f 100644
--- a/editors/mule-common/pkg-comment
+++ b/editors/mule-common/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-mule-2.3, a multilingual emacs
+A multilingual emacs
diff --git a/editors/mule/pkg-comment b/editors/mule/pkg-comment
index b8a3bece7f71..a942ef6fd09f 100644
--- a/editors/mule/pkg-comment
+++ b/editors/mule/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-mule-2.3, a multilingual emacs
+A multilingual emacs
diff --git a/games/nethack/pkg-comment b/games/nethack/pkg-comment
index 9c36977672b1..70ca7a893988 100644
--- a/games/nethack/pkg-comment
+++ b/games/nethack/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-nethack-3.1.3, a dungeon explorin', slashin', hackin' game
+A dungeon explorin', slashin', hackin' game
diff --git a/games/nethack3-tty/pkg-comment b/games/nethack3-tty/pkg-comment
index 9c36977672b1..70ca7a893988 100644
--- a/games/nethack3-tty/pkg-comment
+++ b/games/nethack3-tty/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-nethack-3.1.3, a dungeon explorin', slashin', hackin' game
+A dungeon explorin', slashin', hackin' game
diff --git a/games/nethack3/pkg-comment b/games/nethack3/pkg-comment
index 9c36977672b1..70ca7a893988 100644
--- a/games/nethack3/pkg-comment
+++ b/games/nethack3/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-nethack-3.1.3, a dungeon explorin', slashin', hackin' game
+A dungeon explorin', slashin', hackin' game
diff --git a/games/nethack32/pkg-comment b/games/nethack32/pkg-comment
index 9c36977672b1..70ca7a893988 100644
--- a/games/nethack32/pkg-comment
+++ b/games/nethack32/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-nethack-3.1.3, a dungeon explorin', slashin', hackin' game
+A dungeon explorin', slashin', hackin' game
diff --git a/games/nethack33-nox11/pkg-comment b/games/nethack33-nox11/pkg-comment
index 9c36977672b1..70ca7a893988 100644
--- a/games/nethack33-nox11/pkg-comment
+++ b/games/nethack33-nox11/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-nethack-3.1.3, a dungeon explorin', slashin', hackin' game
+A dungeon explorin', slashin', hackin' game
diff --git a/games/nethack33/pkg-comment b/games/nethack33/pkg-comment
index 9c36977672b1..70ca7a893988 100644
--- a/games/nethack33/pkg-comment
+++ b/games/nethack33/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-nethack-3.1.3, a dungeon explorin', slashin', hackin' game
+A dungeon explorin', slashin', hackin' game
diff --git a/games/nethack34-nox11/pkg-comment b/games/nethack34-nox11/pkg-comment
index 9c36977672b1..70ca7a893988 100644
--- a/games/nethack34-nox11/pkg-comment
+++ b/games/nethack34-nox11/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-nethack-3.1.3, a dungeon explorin', slashin', hackin' game
+A dungeon explorin', slashin', hackin' game
diff --git a/games/nethack34/pkg-comment b/games/nethack34/pkg-comment
index 9c36977672b1..70ca7a893988 100644
--- a/games/nethack34/pkg-comment
+++ b/games/nethack34/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-nethack-3.1.3, a dungeon explorin', slashin', hackin' game
+A dungeon explorin', slashin', hackin' game
diff --git a/games/oneko/pkg-comment b/games/oneko/pkg-comment
index 8bf249a45433..013c718a3f4f 100644
--- a/games/oneko/pkg-comment
+++ b/games/oneko/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-oneko, a cat chasing a mouse all over the screen
+A cat chasing a mouse all over the screen
diff --git a/games/spider/pkg-comment b/games/spider/pkg-comment
index 915fedb1b279..1f66ed8a4c2e 100644
--- a/games/spider/pkg-comment
+++ b/games/spider/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-Spider is a challenging double decked solitaire game.
+A challenging double decked solitaire game
diff --git a/games/xbill/pkg-comment b/games/xbill/pkg-comment
index 448e0a1eafcf..a42efb298a67 100644
--- a/games/xbill/pkg-comment
+++ b/games/xbill/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-xbill-1.1, save your computers from the evil clutches of Bill
+Save your computers from the evil clutches of Bill
diff --git a/games/xemeraldia/pkg-comment b/games/xemeraldia/pkg-comment
index 6bf05e375bd4..7f3b67ef342d 100644
--- a/games/xemeraldia/pkg-comment
+++ b/games/xemeraldia/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-xemeraldia-0.3, a game of breaking blocks
+A game of breaking blocks
diff --git a/games/xgalaga/pkg-comment b/games/xgalaga/pkg-comment
index 4fd8002d0fc8..3ca8cce190da 100644
--- a/games/xgalaga/pkg-comment
+++ b/games/xgalaga/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-xgalaga-1.6, Galaga resurrected on X
+Galaga resurrected on X
diff --git a/games/xlife/pkg-comment b/games/xlife/pkg-comment
index 5781069bef0d..4f92f643574a 100644
--- a/games/xlife/pkg-comment
+++ b/games/xlife/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-xlife-3.0, John Horton Conway's Game of Life.
+John Horton Conway's Game of Life
diff --git a/games/xtic/pkg-comment b/games/xtic/pkg-comment
index 97a33b49852f..d0f4e37de130 100644
--- a/games/xtic/pkg-comment
+++ b/games/xtic/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-xtic-1.12, X version of a simple but tricky board game
+An X version of a simple but tricky board game
diff --git a/graphics/mpeg_play/pkg-comment b/graphics/mpeg_play/pkg-comment
index 4596f80724ab..3a67e110d5c8 100644
--- a/graphics/mpeg_play/pkg-comment
+++ b/graphics/mpeg_play/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-mpeg_play version 2.0, a program to play mpeg movies on X displays
+A program to play mpeg movies on X displays
diff --git a/graphics/netpbm/pkg-comment b/graphics/netpbm/pkg-comment
index ab48689dbcf4..95feafd3b6e9 100644
--- a/graphics/netpbm/pkg-comment
+++ b/graphics/netpbm/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-Netpbm - a toolkit for conversion of images between different formats
+A toolkit for conversion of images between different formats
diff --git a/graphics/xdl/pkg-comment b/graphics/xdl/pkg-comment
index 93122c455d9e..5458b8ab1bb5 100644
--- a/graphics/xdl/pkg-comment
+++ b/graphics/xdl/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-xdl-2.1, displays DL animations on X screen
+Display DL animations on an X screen
diff --git a/graphics/xfig-devel/pkg-comment b/graphics/xfig-devel/pkg-comment
index b3daa1a2a39f..ff868001c8a3 100644
--- a/graphics/xfig-devel/pkg-comment
+++ b/graphics/xfig-devel/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-Xfig - A drawing program. Version 3.1.4
+A drawing program for X11
diff --git a/graphics/xfig/pkg-comment b/graphics/xfig/pkg-comment
index b3daa1a2a39f..ff868001c8a3 100644
--- a/graphics/xfig/pkg-comment
+++ b/graphics/xfig/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-Xfig - A drawing program. Version 3.1.4
+A drawing program for X11
diff --git a/graphics/xgrasp/pkg-comment b/graphics/xgrasp/pkg-comment
index f520ff305e3f..93fd4d91d40c 100644
--- a/graphics/xgrasp/pkg-comment
+++ b/graphics/xgrasp/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-xgrasp-1.7d, displays GL animations on X screen
+Display GL animations on X screen
diff --git a/japanese/Canna/pkg-comment b/japanese/Canna/pkg-comment
index 772cc4ac23d9..1aa218a9dfa2 100644
--- a/japanese/Canna/pkg-comment
+++ b/japanese/Canna/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-Canna 3.2p2 - Kana-Kanji convertion system
+Kana-Kanji conversion system
diff --git a/japanese/FreeWnn-lib/pkg-comment b/japanese/FreeWnn-lib/pkg-comment
index 452cf1ae3b73..e1acebef346b 100644
--- a/japanese/FreeWnn-lib/pkg-comment
+++ b/japanese/FreeWnn-lib/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-Wnn4.2, a Japanese/Chinese/Korean input method (only Japanese built)
+A Japanese/Chinese/Korean input method (only Japanese built)
diff --git a/japanese/FreeWnn-server/pkg-comment b/japanese/FreeWnn-server/pkg-comment
index 452cf1ae3b73..e1acebef346b 100644
--- a/japanese/FreeWnn-server/pkg-comment
+++ b/japanese/FreeWnn-server/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-Wnn4.2, a Japanese/Chinese/Korean input method (only Japanese built)
+A Japanese/Chinese/Korean input method (only Japanese built)
diff --git a/japanese/Wnn6-lib/pkg-comment b/japanese/Wnn6-lib/pkg-comment
index 452cf1ae3b73..e1acebef346b 100644
--- a/japanese/Wnn6-lib/pkg-comment
+++ b/japanese/Wnn6-lib/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-Wnn4.2, a Japanese/Chinese/Korean input method (only Japanese built)
+A Japanese/Chinese/Korean input method (only Japanese built)
diff --git a/japanese/Wnn6/pkg-comment b/japanese/Wnn6/pkg-comment
index 452cf1ae3b73..e1acebef346b 100644
--- a/japanese/Wnn6/pkg-comment
+++ b/japanese/Wnn6/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-Wnn4.2, a Japanese/Chinese/Korean input method (only Japanese built)
+A Japanese/Chinese/Korean input method (only Japanese built)
diff --git a/japanese/Wnn7-lib/pkg-comment b/japanese/Wnn7-lib/pkg-comment
index 452cf1ae3b73..e1acebef346b 100644
--- a/japanese/Wnn7-lib/pkg-comment
+++ b/japanese/Wnn7-lib/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-Wnn4.2, a Japanese/Chinese/Korean input method (only Japanese built)
+A Japanese/Chinese/Korean input method (only Japanese built)
diff --git a/japanese/canna-lib/pkg-comment b/japanese/canna-lib/pkg-comment
index 772cc4ac23d9..1aa218a9dfa2 100644
--- a/japanese/canna-lib/pkg-comment
+++ b/japanese/canna-lib/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-Canna 3.2p2 - Kana-Kanji convertion system
+Kana-Kanji conversion system
diff --git a/japanese/canna-server/pkg-comment b/japanese/canna-server/pkg-comment
index 772cc4ac23d9..1aa218a9dfa2 100644
--- a/japanese/canna-server/pkg-comment
+++ b/japanese/canna-server/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-Canna 3.2p2 - Kana-Kanji convertion system
+Kana-Kanji conversion system
diff --git a/japanese/chimera/pkg-comment b/japanese/chimera/pkg-comment
index 3a1f458bd9dd..373e15adc880 100644
--- a/japanese/chimera/pkg-comment
+++ b/japanese/chimera/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-chimera - X/Athena World-Wide Web Client. Version 1.65 + kanji patch
+X/Athena World-Wide Web client + kanji patch
diff --git a/japanese/groff/pkg-comment b/japanese/groff/pkg-comment
index ecdcd0906083..1dcd472b5600 100644
--- a/japanese/groff/pkg-comment
+++ b/japanese/groff/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-jp-groff-0.98, Japanese enhancement of GNU groff-1.09
+Japanese enhancement of GNU groff
diff --git a/japanese/gxditview/pkg-comment b/japanese/gxditview/pkg-comment
index 19708cfb4783..4ac848387405 100644
--- a/japanese/gxditview/pkg-comment
+++ b/japanese/gxditview/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-jp-gxditview -- Japanized GNU's modified xditview.
+Japanized GNU's modified xditview
diff --git a/japanese/kinput2-canna/pkg-comment b/japanese/kinput2-canna/pkg-comment
index e60f65ccc1d2..6cd009ab2f62 100644
--- a/japanese/kinput2-canna/pkg-comment
+++ b/japanese/kinput2-canna/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-kinput2 version 2.0p1, an input server of Japanese text (Canna version)
+An input server of Japanese text (Canna version)
diff --git a/japanese/kterm/pkg-comment b/japanese/kterm/pkg-comment
index 11e279d70c63..0f44662dbffa 100644
--- a/japanese/kterm/pkg-comment
+++ b/japanese/kterm/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-kterm-6.1.0, an xterm that speaks Japanese
+An xterm that speaks Japanese
diff --git a/japanese/kterm16c/pkg-comment b/japanese/kterm16c/pkg-comment
index 11e279d70c63..0f44662dbffa 100644
--- a/japanese/kterm16c/pkg-comment
+++ b/japanese/kterm16c/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-kterm-6.1.0, an xterm that speaks Japanese
+An xterm that speaks Japanese
diff --git a/japanese/mh/pkg-comment b/japanese/mh/pkg-comment
index 4ed367b07787..e558bcfd737e 100644
--- a/japanese/mh/pkg-comment
+++ b/japanese/mh/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-Rand MH mail handling system, version 6.8.3 + Japanese patches
+Rand MH mail handling system + Japanese patches
diff --git a/japanese/mule-canna/pkg-comment b/japanese/mule-canna/pkg-comment
index 5b262eaeb4f1..702628be3371 100644
--- a/japanese/mule-canna/pkg-comment
+++ b/japanese/mule-canna/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-mule-2.3, a multilingual emacs, with Canna support built in
+A multilingual emacs, with Canna support built in
diff --git a/japanese/mule-freewnn/pkg-comment b/japanese/mule-freewnn/pkg-comment
index 2b11ea9962fd..a91dd53bc03c 100644
--- a/japanese/mule-freewnn/pkg-comment
+++ b/japanese/mule-freewnn/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-mule-2.3, a multilingual emacs, with Wnn support built in
+A multilingual emacs, with Wnn support built in
diff --git a/japanese/mule-wnn6/pkg-comment b/japanese/mule-wnn6/pkg-comment
index 2b11ea9962fd..a91dd53bc03c 100644
--- a/japanese/mule-wnn6/pkg-comment
+++ b/japanese/mule-wnn6/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-mule-2.3, a multilingual emacs, with Wnn support built in
+A multilingual emacs, with Wnn support built in
diff --git a/japanese/mule-wnn7/pkg-comment b/japanese/mule-wnn7/pkg-comment
index 2b11ea9962fd..a91dd53bc03c 100644
--- a/japanese/mule-wnn7/pkg-comment
+++ b/japanese/mule-wnn7/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-mule-2.3, a multilingual emacs, with Wnn support built in
+A multilingual emacs, with Wnn support built in
diff --git a/japanese/nethack/pkg-comment b/japanese/nethack/pkg-comment
index bd9328aceedd..70ca7a893988 100644
--- a/japanese/nethack/pkg-comment
+++ b/japanese/nethack/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-jp-nethack-1.0.3, a dungeon explorin', slashin', hackin' game
+A dungeon explorin', slashin', hackin' game
diff --git a/japanese/nethack32/pkg-comment b/japanese/nethack32/pkg-comment
index bd9328aceedd..70ca7a893988 100644
--- a/japanese/nethack32/pkg-comment
+++ b/japanese/nethack32/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-jp-nethack-1.0.3, a dungeon explorin', slashin', hackin' game
+A dungeon explorin', slashin', hackin' game
diff --git a/japanese/nethack34/pkg-comment b/japanese/nethack34/pkg-comment
index bd9328aceedd..70ca7a893988 100644
--- a/japanese/nethack34/pkg-comment
+++ b/japanese/nethack34/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-jp-nethack-1.0.3, a dungeon explorin', slashin', hackin' game
+A dungeon explorin', slashin', hackin' game
diff --git a/japanese/nkf/pkg-comment b/japanese/nkf/pkg-comment
index b8c586803418..3ea1b6fd6abc 100644
--- a/japanese/nkf/pkg-comment
+++ b/japanese/nkf/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-nkf-1.5pl1, Network Kanji code conversion Filter
+Network Kanji code conversion Filter
diff --git a/lang/pbasic/pkg-comment b/lang/pbasic/pkg-comment
index 1ea9647a034b..7335d11e5838 100644
--- a/lang/pbasic/pkg-comment
+++ b/lang/pbasic/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-pbasic - Phil Cokcroft's Basic Interpreter V2.0 (previously Rabbit Basic)
+Phil Cockroft's Basic Interpreter (previously Rabbit Basic)
diff --git a/math/hexcalc/pkg-comment b/math/hexcalc/pkg-comment
index 34317a360f49..cd9f5fad9f54 100644
--- a/math/hexcalc/pkg-comment
+++ b/math/hexcalc/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-hexcalc, a multi-radix calculator for x11
+A multi-radix calculator for x11
diff --git a/math/xgraph/pkg-comment b/math/xgraph/pkg-comment
index 55c2b89550e0..cf38f0894442 100644
--- a/math/xgraph/pkg-comment
+++ b/math/xgraph/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-xgraph ver. 11, a program that helps you plot graphs
+A program that helps you plot graphs
diff --git a/misc/chord/pkg-comment b/misc/chord/pkg-comment
index 6a62427dc9a9..7d87fe69b789 100644
--- a/misc/chord/pkg-comment
+++ b/misc/chord/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-chord-3.6, produce PS sheet-music from text input
+Produce PS sheet-music from text input
diff --git a/misc/colorls/pkg-comment b/misc/colorls/pkg-comment
index 3994714addd5..f3f09f0e4f61 100644
--- a/misc/colorls/pkg-comment
+++ b/misc/colorls/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-colorls is an ls replacement that can use color to display file attributes.
+An ls that can use color to display file attributes
diff --git a/misc/kp/pkg-comment b/misc/kp/pkg-comment
index 4303eea89fd1..1353e610000e 100644
--- a/misc/kp/pkg-comment
+++ b/misc/kp/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-kp, The Keyboard Practicer, ver. 0.95
+The Keyboard Practicer, touch-type training program
diff --git a/multimedia/mpeg_play/pkg-comment b/multimedia/mpeg_play/pkg-comment
index 4596f80724ab..3a67e110d5c8 100644
--- a/multimedia/mpeg_play/pkg-comment
+++ b/multimedia/mpeg_play/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-mpeg_play version 2.0, a program to play mpeg movies on X displays
+A program to play mpeg movies on X displays
diff --git a/net/ytalk/pkg-comment b/net/ytalk/pkg-comment
index 090f0af58da1..156f525196bf 100644
--- a/net/ytalk/pkg-comment
+++ b/net/ytalk/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-ytalk-3.0pl2, a new "talk" that can talk to multiple parties at once
+A new "talk" that can talk to multiple parties at once
diff --git a/sysutils/xbatt/pkg-comment b/sysutils/xbatt/pkg-comment
index 4dae06d4cfa4..6aa13166171d 100644
--- a/sysutils/xbatt/pkg-comment
+++ b/sysutils/xbatt/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-xbatt 1.0 - battery status display for X11
+Laptop battery status display for X11
diff --git a/sysutils/xdu/pkg-comment b/sysutils/xdu/pkg-comment
index 4febd261c2ca..ebe402770741 100644
--- a/sysutils/xdu/pkg-comment
+++ b/sysutils/xdu/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-xdu, graphically display output of du
+Graphically display output of du
diff --git a/sysutils/xsysstats/pkg-comment b/sysutils/xsysstats/pkg-comment
index 1f79fe6f798f..6badd2c9957c 100644
--- a/sysutils/xsysstats/pkg-comment
+++ b/sysutils/xsysstats/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-xsysstats-1.34, a system information display tool
+A system information display tool
diff --git a/textproc/coco/pkg-comment b/textproc/coco/pkg-comment
index b8a3bece7f71..a942ef6fd09f 100644
--- a/textproc/coco/pkg-comment
+++ b/textproc/coco/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-mule-2.3, a multilingual emacs
+A multilingual emacs
diff --git a/www/chimera/pkg-comment b/www/chimera/pkg-comment
index f98fcbe8a0b1..6e188068e4d5 100644
--- a/www/chimera/pkg-comment
+++ b/www/chimera/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-chimera - X/Athena World-Wide Web Client. Version 1.65
+X/Athena World-Wide Web client
diff --git a/www/chimera2/pkg-comment b/www/chimera2/pkg-comment
index f98fcbe8a0b1..6e188068e4d5 100644
--- a/www/chimera2/pkg-comment
+++ b/www/chimera2/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-chimera - X/Athena World-Wide Web Client. Version 1.65
+X/Athena World-Wide Web client
diff --git a/x11-clocks/emiclock/pkg-comment b/x11-clocks/emiclock/pkg-comment
index 3d228adddafa..6f0dec990cf3 100644
--- a/x11-clocks/emiclock/pkg-comment
+++ b/x11-clocks/emiclock/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-Emi Clock 1.0.2 - hyper animated face analog clock for X11
+Hyper-animated face analog clock for X11
diff --git a/x11-fonts/xfed/pkg-comment b/x11-fonts/xfed/pkg-comment
index c03ea1979662..fd735fb2ea0d 100644
--- a/x11-fonts/xfed/pkg-comment
+++ b/x11-fonts/xfed/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-xfed, a program that will let you edit X fonts (.bdf files)
+A program that will let you edit X fonts (.bdf files)
diff --git a/x11-toolkits/Xaw3d/pkg-comment b/x11-toolkits/Xaw3d/pkg-comment
index 52db2cbe78fd..f69bf7b62a25 100644
--- a/x11-toolkits/Xaw3d/pkg-comment
+++ b/x11-toolkits/Xaw3d/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-Xaw3d-1.2a, a 3-D Athena Widget set that looks like Motif.
+A 3-D Athena Widget set that looks like Motif
diff --git a/x11-wm/piewm/pkg-comment b/x11-wm/piewm/pkg-comment
index 1bb45d31ef74..32f2b2ef31ac 100644
--- a/x11-wm/piewm/pkg-comment
+++ b/x11-wm/piewm/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-piewm, tvtwm with pie menus, where tvtwm is a virtual desktop twm
+piewm is tvtwm with pie (circular) menus
diff --git a/x11/xcolors/pkg-comment b/x11/xcolors/pkg-comment
index d7defaa71684..bc79ff1ee735 100644
--- a/x11/xcolors/pkg-comment
+++ b/x11/xcolors/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-xcolors, displays the colors in the universe, R6 version
+Display all (ok, most of) the colors in the universe
diff --git a/x11/xscreensaver/pkg-comment b/x11/xscreensaver/pkg-comment
index 682437c361b9..c36890c1140a 100644
--- a/x11/xscreensaver/pkg-comment
+++ b/x11/xscreensaver/pkg-comment
@@ -1 +1 @@
-xscreensaver-1.25, save your screen while entertaining your cat
+Save your screen while you entertain your cat