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@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
</para>
<para>
Describe the interface. Include the fact that the
- whole book consists of a set of cards, organized into
+ whole address book consists of a set of cards, organized into
folders.
</para>
</sect1>
@@ -194,7 +194,7 @@
</sect1>
<sect1 id="usage-contact-sharing">
- <title>Sharing your cards (Or Keeping them to Yourself)</title>
+ <title>Sharing your Cards (and keeping them to yourself)</title>
<para>
Cards can be shared over a network. This is the sort of
feature you'll want to use if your company has a list of
@@ -213,7 +213,11 @@
contacts there, so I know whom to call. Since we also
share the calendars, I know that Deanna has already
scheduled a meeting with them next Thursday, and I can
- just ask her to bring up my concerns at the meeting.
+ either go to the meeting myself or ask Deanna to
+ discuss my concerns for me. Either way, I avoid
+ having to schedule yet another meeting with Company X,
+ which is good since everybody hates their products and
+ they're doomed to fail anyway.
</para>
</example>
@@ -225,9 +229,9 @@
decide which folders you want to make accessible to others.
</para>
<para>
- To begin sharing a folder of address cards, select <!--
+ To begin sharing a folder of address cards, select (something) <!--
DESCRIBE PROCESS HERE -->. The
- <interface>Sharing</interface> will pop up. It contains:
+ <interface>Sharing</interface> window will pop up. It contains:
<!--DESCRIBE INTERFACE HERE-->
</para>
</sect1>
@@ -241,6 +245,7 @@
mailing lists, you'll find that the contact manager is more
than a mere address book.
</para>
+
<sect2 id="contact-automation-basic">
<title>Send me a card: Adding New Cards Quickly</title>
<para>