From 37c137259f037993e7e5bb17090bc9e23483dac9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Aaron Weber <aaron@ximian.com>
Date: Wed, 26 Sep 2001 13:34:28 +0000
Subject: Polish, describe names of conduits.

2001-09-26  Aaron Weber  <aaron@ximian.com>

	* C/config-sync.sgml: Polish, describe names of conduits.

	* C/usage-sync.sgml: Minor changes.

svn path=/trunk/; revision=13149
---
 help/C/config-sync.sgml | 45 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++-------------------
 help/C/usage-sync.sgml  | 23 +++++++++++++++--------
 help/ChangeLog          |  6 ++++++
 3 files changed, 47 insertions(+), 27 deletions(-)

diff --git a/help/C/config-sync.sgml b/help/C/config-sync.sgml
index 63015a0d21..8490f9a84b 100644
--- a/help/C/config-sync.sgml
+++ b/help/C/config-sync.sgml
@@ -20,20 +20,29 @@
     <para>
        If you haven't used a handheld device with your computer
        before, you'll need to run the GNOME <application>Control
-       Center</application> and make sure that <application>Pilot
-       Link</application> is properly configured. Then, select the
-       <application>Evolution</application> <glossterm
-       linkend="conduit">conduits</glossterm> under the
-       <guilabel>Pilot Conduits</guilabel> section of the Control
-       Center.
-  </para>
+       Center</application> by selecting
+       <menuchoice><guimenu>System</guimenu><guimenuitem>Settings</guimenuitem></menuchoice>,
+       and make sure that <application>Pilot Link</application> is
+       properly configured.
+    </para>
     <para>
         Once your computer and your Palm-OS device are talking happily
-        to each other, you'll have to decide what exactly you want
-        them to do with the data they exchange.  To enable a conduit, click the
-        <guibutton>Enable</guibutton> to enable it and click
-        <guibutton>Settings</guibutton>.  Your options may vary
-        depending on the conduit, but typically they will be:
+        to each other, select the <glossterm
+        linkend="conduit">conduits</glossterm> you want under the
+        <guilabel>Pilot Conduits</guilabel> section of the Control
+        Center.  You may use conduits to synchronize data with several
+        applications; the <application>Ximian Evolution</application>
+        conduits are labelled <guilabel>EAddress</guilabel>, for the
+        address cards in your Contact Manager,
+        <guilabel>ECalendar</guilabel>, for your Calendar, and
+        <guilabel>ETodo</guilabel>, for your Task List.
+    </para>
+   <para>
+      To enable a conduit, click the
+        <guibutton>Enable</guibutton> to enable it, and click
+        <guibutton>Settings</guibutton> to change what it will do when
+        activated.  Your options may vary depending on the conduit,
+        but typically they will be:
 
         <variablelist>
          <varlistentry>
@@ -101,20 +110,18 @@
     </para>
 
     <para>
-      Select a behavior for each conduit available.  For the most
-      part, you'll want to stick with
+      Select the behavior you want for each conduit you choose to use.
+      If you're not sure, go ahead and stick with
       <guilabel>Synchronize</guilabel>.  Then, put your handheld on
-      its cradle and press the synchronization button.
+      its cradle and press the HotSync button.
     </para>
-
-
       <para> 
          <tip> 
 	  <title>Data Loss Prevention</title> 
 	  <para>
 	    It's always a good idea to make a backup.  To do that,
-	    make a copy of your
-	    <filename>~/evolution</filename> directory.
+	    make a copy of the <filename>evolution</filename>
+	    directory inside your home directory.
           </para>
 	</tip>
        </para>
diff --git a/help/C/usage-sync.sgml b/help/C/usage-sync.sgml
index 7be3be9eb6..5b93a65736 100644
--- a/help/C/usage-sync.sgml
+++ b/help/C/usage-sync.sgml
@@ -1,16 +1,17 @@
-
     <chapter id="usage-sync">
       <title>Synchronizing Evolution with Hand-Held Devices</title>
       <para>
-        This chapter covers is how to synchronize data 
-        installed and configured.  If you need information on how to
-        set up a synchronization system, consult <xref
-        linkend="config-sync">.
+        This chapter is very short.  It describes how to synchronize
+        the data on your Palm-OS device with the data you store in
+        <application>Ximian Evolution</application>.  If you need
+        information on how to set up handheld synchronization, consult
+        <xref linkend="config-sync">.
       </para>
+
       <sect1 id="hotsync">
         <title>Using HotSync</title>
         <para>
-          Put your hand-held device on its cradle and press the
+          Put your hand-held device in its cradle and press the
           HotSync button.
         </para>
 
@@ -25,8 +26,14 @@ protection on your handheld.
 </para>
 </tip>
         <para>
-	 If your environment is correctly configured to sync with your
-	 PDA, then it should sync with <application>Evolution</application>.
+	 If you have followed the set up instructions properly, your
+	 Palm-OS device will synchronize data with <application>Ximian
+	 Evolution</application>.
         </para>
+
+         <para>
+            That's it.
+         </para>
+
        </sect1>
     </chapter>
diff --git a/help/ChangeLog b/help/ChangeLog
index 624e3963ee..8033e69d62 100644
--- a/help/ChangeLog
+++ b/help/ChangeLog
@@ -1,3 +1,9 @@
+2001-09-26  Aaron Weber  <aaron@ximian.com>
+
+	* C/config-sync.sgml: Polish, describe names of conduits.
+
+	* C/usage-sync.sgml: Minor changes.
+
 2001-09-25  Ettore Perazzoli  <ettore@ximian.com>
 
 	[Patch for Automake 1.5 compatibility pointed out by Richard
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