Polish, describe names of conduits.

2001-09-26  Aaron Weber  <aaron@ximian.com>

	* C/config-sync.sgml: Polish, describe names of conduits.

	* C/usage-sync.sgml: Minor changes.

svn path=/trunk/; revision=13149

1 files changed, 15 insertions, 8 deletions

diff --git a/help/C/usage-sync.sgml b/help/C/usage-sync.sgml
index 7be3be9eb6..5b93a65736 100644
--- a/help/C/usage-sync.sgml
+++ b/help/C/usage-sync.sgml
@@ -1,16 +1,17 @@
-
     <chapter id="usage-sync">
       <title>Synchronizing Evolution with Hand-Held Devices</title>
       <para>
-        This chapter covers is how to synchronize data 
-        installed and configured.  If you need information on how to
-        set up a synchronization system, consult <xref
-        linkend="config-sync">.
+        This chapter is very short.  It describes how to synchronize
+        the data on your Palm-OS device with the data you store in
+        <application>Ximian Evolution</application>.  If you need
+        information on how to set up handheld synchronization, consult
+        <xref linkend="config-sync">.
       </para>
+
       <sect1 id="hotsync">
         <title>Using HotSync</title>
         <para>
-          Put your hand-held device on its cradle and press the
+          Put your hand-held device in its cradle and press the
           HotSync button.
         </para>
 
@@ -25,8 +26,14 @@ protection on your handheld.
 </para>
 </tip>
         <para>
-	 If your environment is correctly configured to sync with your
-	 PDA, then it should sync with <application>Evolution</application>.
+	 If you have followed the set up instructions properly, your
+	 Palm-OS device will synchronize data with <application>Ximian
+	 Evolution</application>.
         </para>
+
+         <para>
+            That's it.
+         </para>
+
        </sect1>
     </chapter>